good stuff, coundn't sit through the whole thing

and I am not one to talk considering I rarely put anything out there.....

but,

Improvements:

1) try more same time same direction and more split time but opposite direction spinning.

2) try turning more between moves and sequences of moves....

3) your flow is sweet but try altering the tempo of your flow, not just from slow to fast but all the speeds in between.

4) More stalls to move between ame and opposite direction.

Commendations:

1) you made a video...awseome.

2) the editing in your video is good enough for COL....

3) your flow is good, how long have you been spinning?

4) a few nice flowers.

Well hope that helps......

N

I liked the video, very nice editing...
I can't say anything about the poi stuff as I don't do poi... but the rope-dart felt awkward... I don't know... maybe it's because its a repetitive, or maybe it's because there was *NO* throws at all... lol ;-)
ok... there was some of the "bird kicks branch" stuff, but that isn't really a throw...

a rope-dart is *BASED* on throws the same way a poi is based on spinning (i don't see any throw-like moves in poi)... a meteor hammer has less throws, but even a meteor uses lots of throws...

Great video!

from a purely wushu standpoint:

- your hips are closed/tight and you're hooking your lower back. both of these will affect your posture and your mobility.
- your footwork is unsure. by having a more solid foundation, the rest of your moves will come more easily.
- left arm is not being used. other than the asthetics of having your left arm in a semi-bent position, your left arm should be extending and bending constantly to control the length of the rope and thus, the speed of rotation.